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Educare
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 by Sara 20 months 17 days ago at "Vail - Eagle Valley...".
Hi Aggie, this is a test at your request to post a comment. Are you going to show me your new capabilities?
Recent comments Educare posted
 by Educare 7 months 10 days ago at "My Page - Vail -...".
yes she is spaced out
 by Educare 10 months 15 days ago at "Learning Styles...".
What have you decided to do to increase your chances of success?
 by Educare 10 months 25 days ago at "Discrimination...".
Who is singular. Use "discriminates"
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
This entire sentence was taken from another site. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Global_warming
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
http://www.squidoo.com/greenhouseeffect
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
This entire sentence was taken from another site. Be careful when you pull information to not plagiarize.
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
You don't need "of the" here.
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
Do not start a sentence with "and".
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
Preposition choice: attention "to"
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
Phrase options: the entire world or the whole world
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
Preposition choice: for
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
This needs to be plural: temperatures.
 by Educare 12 months 27 days ago at "Global warming is...".
"level" is a better word here.
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
existed. You need the past tense here since you are talking about former times.
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
"The Little Prince" should be underlined since it is a book. This is one of my favorite books. On ne voit bien qu'avec le coeur. L'essentiel est invisible pour les yeux.
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
If you "look" at it "biologically"...
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
Ah! I would argue that it will always exist as long as there are two (2) or more people with at least one (1) variation.
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
If you disagree with a topic, that means you disagree with the selection of the topic. I think you want to disagree with an argument that racism is good. The problem is that no one has made this argument. You can, however, object to racism.
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
The problem "with"...
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
Do you mean: "different kinds of racism"?
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
You don't need the comma here.
 by Educare 12 months 28 days ago at "Racism! Does it...".
...has existed for centuries...
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
...this is illegal... How illegal? 'completely' illegal.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
You need to capitalize the first letter of an adjective that refers to people or items from another country.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
A lot = two words However, a better choice would be "a long time ago"
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
I is always capitalized.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
Everybody has opinions. or Everybody has an opinion. What kind of opinion/opinions? "different. Therefore: Everybody has different opinions. or Everybody has a different opinion.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
Everybody is actually a singular word. It refers to every individual body. Therefore, we need to write "Everybody has..."
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
Here, you are looking for an adjective. racism = noun racist = adjective
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
Have you been reading...?
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "RACISM - Vail -...".
You don't need "The" here since you are talking about the general idea of racism.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
as "badly", unlike... The section starting with "unlike" can not stand on its own. It needs to be part of the previous sentence.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
a lot should be two (2) words.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "football - Vail -...".
"so" would be a better word choice here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "discrimination: I...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "discrimination: I...".
You might want to start a new sentence here. It doesn't matter
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "discrimination: I...".
You don't need the word "from" here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "discrimination: I...".
... are, (and/or) how smart...
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "discrimination: I...".
"than" is used for comparison; "then" refers to time sequence.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "discrimination: I...".
every person = every individual person = singular idea Therefore, "every person 'is' equal"
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "discrimination: I...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "discrimination -...".
You are right in the thought behind these words; however, it might be easier to write: "because of discrimination"
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "discrimination -...".
In English we "make" decisions
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "discrimination -...".
Start the first word of a sentence with a capital letter.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
"humanity" represents all humans so we think of it as plural. In reality, however, it is a singular concept of all humans. Therefore, you have a choice here. 1) Humanity is killing itself. or 2) Humans are killing each other.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
child = singular children = plural
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
People = plural their = plural mind = singular heart = singular Therefore, you want: "their minds and hearts"
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
You don't need "they" here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
You don't need "is" here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
"without" is one word
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
...if discrimination didn't exist.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
"than" is a word for comparison. "then" refers to time
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Discrimination -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Tecnology bad -...".
Start a new sentence here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Tecnology bad -...".
"on" is a better preposition here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Tecnology bad -...".
become dependent on this tool.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Tecnology bad -...".
Start a new sentence here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls.-...".
they can give away "private" and...
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls.-...".
Part 1: The internet is not bad Part 2: like everything in this world Part 3: it depends on how we use it. There are several ways to break this up. Parts 1 and 3 could stand on their own. They are complete thoughts. Part 2 is a subordinate clause. It seems to connect with Part 3. For example: The internet is not bad. Like everything in this world, it depends on how we use it.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls.-...".
"access" goes with the preposition "to" "access of the children to the internet."
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls.-...".
I don't know what you mean with the word "embarrassed". Try rephrasing it.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls.-...".
"They can access dangerous websites" or "They can gain access to dangerous websites".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls.-...".
It might be better to use the phase: spend a long time.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls.-...".
Right now, we use the preposition "on" when referring to the internet. "... on the internet."
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "The right of a good...".
by having the knowledge
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "The right of a good...".
...demand your right...
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "The right of a good...".
...mobility, which allows you to succeed in life.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "The right of a good...".
Start a new sentence here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "The right of a good...".
Start a new sentence here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "The right of a good...".
...receive "a" better education...
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "The right of a good...".
"can access a very good education" or "can gain access to a very good education"
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Racism - Vail -...".
don't need fights or wars; we need peace and equality. "we need' starts a new thought (sentence); however, since you are tying them together, you can use a semicolon.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Racism - Vail -...".
You should be starting a new sentence here. people. We...
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Racism - Vail -...".
"Life" is a general concept. Therefore, you don't need "The".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Racism - Vail -...".
"others" would probably have more than one point of view. ...points of view.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Racism - Vail -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "internet controls -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "internet controls -...".
The plural "precautions" would be better.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "internet controls -...".
"information" is always considered an uncountable noun. Therefore, "this information" is correct.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "internet controls -...".
I know everybody seems plural but think of it as every individual body. "everybody has..."
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "internet controls -...".
You don't need "on" here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "internet controls -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "internet controls -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "internet controls -...".
"A lot of people" = plural; "addict" = singular. They need to agree.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "internet controls -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet controls -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet controls -...".
At this point, we would use "on" the internet. That might change someday.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet controls -...".
"didn't" or "shouldn't" ?
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet controls -...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet controls -...".
"Personnel" refers to employees of a company. "Personal" refers to private information.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet controls -...".
...control "the" internet...
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls -...".
You are talking about others in the 3rd person in the phase: "Sometimes people.." To be consistent, use the word "themselves".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls -...".
What do you mean to say with this phrase. I do not understand.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls -...".
You probably want the phrase "depend on"
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls -...".
This is very well-phrased. Check your other "internet/control" phrases.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls -...".
You can use "strange people" or "strangers". They have, however, a different fee. Strangers are just people you have not met. Strange people may be known or unknown to you, but they are weird.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet Controls -...".
Facebook is a place, so we need "where"
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet control:...".
"are" is plural "advertisement" is singular. The need to agree
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet control:...".
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet control:...".
"On the world wide web"...
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet control:...".
A semicolon (;) would be a good choice here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet control:...".
Try the phrase: "computer monitor"
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet control:...".
Spelling: change the "y" to "i" and add "es"/
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet control:...".
Check your spelling. I think you want: except.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet control:...".
You don't need this word (what) here.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet control:...".
At this point, you are trying to refer to the acts of studying or playing. Therefore, use the gerunds: studying and playing.
 by Educare 12 months 29 days ago at "Internet control:...".
Try this phrase: "world-wide".
 by Educare 13 months 2 days ago at "Internet Controls -...".
 by Educare 13 months 2 days ago at "Internet Controls -...".
It might be better if you use the expression: "the internet so much"
 by Educare 13 months 18 days ago at "Winter Sports -...".
I hurt; you hurt; it hurts.
 by Educare 13 months 18 days ago at "Winter Sports -...".
I have "experienced" winter--or--"wintered"
 by Educare 13 months 18 days ago at "Winter Sports -...".
practice "skiining". Here we need ski to change from a verb to a gerund (verb acting as a noun).
 by Educare 13 months 19 days ago at "Winter Sports -...".
 by Educare 13 months 21 days ago at "Lies My Teacher...".
here = location hear = bringing in information through sound.
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Discrimination...".
Is this not discrimination?
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Discrimination...".
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Discrimination...".
Capitalize the first letter of a language.
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Discrimination...".
the state of Colorado
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Discrimination...".
use the past tense, "said"
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Discrimination...".
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Fired (#55) - Vail...".
...dress "in" the wrong clothes
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Fired (#55) - Vail...".
religions, and so on, but
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Fired (#55) - Vail...".
...he is late all the time.
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Fired (#55) - Vail...".
...do his job "that" well.
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Fired (#55) - Vail...".
I don't You don't He doesn't
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Fired (#55) - Vail...".
When you write "for example" in the middle of a sentence, make a comma sandwich. ..., for example, ...
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Fired (#55) - Vail...".
face = singular; therefore, "face looks"
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Fired (#55) - Vail...".
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Fired (#55) - Vail...".
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Fired (#55) - Vail...".
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Health Care (#56) -...".
...nobody protects against pain.
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Health Care (#56) -...".
"everybody" is one word.
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Health Care (#56) -...".
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Health Care (#56) -...".
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Health Care (#56) -...".
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Health Care (#56) -...".
Use a comma after an introductory phrase..."For example, "
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Health Care (#56) -...".
employers = the bosses employees = the workers
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Health Care (#56) -...".
 by Educare 17 months 17 days ago at "Health Care (#56) -...".
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
You don't need a capital letter here.
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
You don't need a capital letter here.
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
Begin your sentence here. (We...)
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
End your sentence here. (...factor.)
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
When you pluralize a noun that ends in "y", change the "y" to "i" and add "es".
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
Always start a sentence with a capital letter.
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
"to the south of the U.S." means that the activity took place in Mexico or further south. "in the southern part of the U.S." would mean activity within the U.S. borders. Also, to which activity are you referring?
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
Mexico is a proper name and should start with a capital M.
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
...about screening anyone... or ...about the screening of anyone...
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
Since you only have two (2) items, use a conjunction. ...flying lessons and planning to cause...
 by Educare 18 months 5 days ago at "Immigration - Vail...".
 by Educare 18 months 6 days ago at "Socail Work in...".
Do you really need a comma here?
 by Educare 18 months 7 days ago at "Socail Work in...".
Check your spelling.
 by Educare 18 months 20 days ago at "Vail - Eagle Valley...".
Are you sure this is excellent?
 by Educare 18 months 23 days ago at "Wal-Mart goes...".
 by Educare 19 months 18 days ago at "Testing Inline on...".
Perhaps a better word would be "crazy".
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
...Brazil, there used to live...
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
...away. After that, it was...
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
In English we "attend universities"
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
...so many funny moments!
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
"to" is not needed here.
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
I don't understand your use of wherever (anywhere, everywhere).
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
Start a new sentence with "We are all friends.
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
You have too many sentences here pasted together with commas. You need to separate them with periods.
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
...close; she is super funny.
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
...they would always be super happy... or I hope they will always be super happy...
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
...really small because ... You don't need a semi-colon here.
 by Educare 20 months 2 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
You can count the number of aunts, uncles, and cousins you have; therefore, you need to use "many". Use "much" for words that are not countable. For example, "How much gasoline do you need?" versus "How many gallons of gasoline do you need?"
 by Educare 20 months 3 days ago at "Tradition! - Vail -...".
Please don't start a sentence with a conjunction.
 by Educare 20 months 4 days ago at "President Bush -...".
You make it seem as though President Bush was correct in his statements. Be careful with this one.
 by Educare 20 months 4 days ago at "President Bush -...".
Check your spelling, please.
 by Educare 20 months 4 days ago at "President Bush -...".
Proper names start with capital letters.
 by Educare 20 months 4 days ago at "President Bush -...".
We may not like Saddam, but he still deserves capital letters in his proper name. Also, please check the spelling of his surname.
 by Educare 20 months 4 days ago at "President Bush -...".
He admitted... is starting a new sentence. You need "." after rising.
 by Educare 20 months 4 days ago at "President Bush -...".
 by Educare 20 months 4 days ago at "President Bush -...".
 by Educare 20 months 4 days ago at "President Bush -...".
A proper name needs to start with a capital letter.
 by Educare 20 months 4 days ago at "President Bush -...".
A new sentence needs a capital letter.
 by Educare 20 months 9 days ago at "Dreams - Vail -...".
End this sentence and start another with "I loved..."
 by Educare 20 months 9 days ago at "Dreams - Vail -...".
You don't need the comma.
 by Educare 20 months 9 days ago at "Dreams - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 10 days ago at "Dreams - Vail -...".
An is singular, instruments are plural. You need to make them agree
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "What do you wish...".
"have tranquility forever. You don't need "the" unless you are referring to a specific kind of tranquility. Example: I would like the tranquility that comes with age.
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "What do you wish...".
..."like my family to have"...
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "What do you wish...".
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "What do you wish...".
"different thoughts about"
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Wal-Mart goes...".
possibilities: "or better looking produce" "aesthetics"
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Wal-Mart goes...".
...are the same price "as" non-organic,...
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Wal-Mart goes...".
...you that prices are...
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
...accomplish; however, When combining two thoughts with "however", it should be "; however,".
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
A better phrase would be: "just as you would like"...
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
idiom = "wishes come true"
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
'advice' is singular; therefore, "they will follow "it" or not..."
 by Educare 20 months 11 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Buzz This!".
How can my students comment and not show up as me? Do they each need an account?
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "The Emperor of...".
...daughters of emperors...
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "The Emperor of...".
"they are" = plural "child" = singular
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
This sentence is running on. Can you break it into smaller, yet complete, thoughts?
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
...I wish my loved ones prosperity.
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
"well-provided for" Even though you should not end in a preposition (for), it would still be a better phrase.
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
"Sooner" is comparative; therefore, it would be better to use "more easily".
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
"...at some point--a great job, wonderful friends,...
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
Even (if) we are healthy,...
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
"Their" is plural; "life" is singular. You need to make them agree.
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
We "share with" everybody around us.
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
"Our" is plural; "life" is singular. You need to make them agree.
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
Start a new sentence here.
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".
Well and healthy are synonyms. Choose one.
 by Educare 20 months 17 days ago at "Blessings - Vail -...".

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